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Old 05-18-2009, 07:51 PM   #1
CyberRebel
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Default Review of .hack//XXXX

This story starts out with Kite and Orca, both friends in Real Life playing The World. Orca and Kite are both on the hunting grounds when suddenly, a large monster comes out of nowhere and starts attacking them.

Orca's character falls unconscious.

While he falls unconscious in the World, he also falls unconscious in Real Life as well.

Thanks to Aura, who once again appears to give Kite another rare item, a bracelet, he manages to save the day and his friends: Orca wakes up, and Rena is saved from an evil monster.

Although I do like the art in this, the storyline is very weak and falls flat on its face. I can only give it a "Read it when you're dead bored," rating because of that fact.

Ratings:

Read it ASAP = ****
Read it soon = ***
Read it when you're dead bored = **
Burn it like BBQ = *
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