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Old 04-12-2009, 02:40 AM   #1
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Default Love is Painful - A Shugo Chara! Fanfiction

This is actually my first ever story of Shugo Chara I hope you guys like it Now I wrote this on August 7, 2008 so it's not that good. My writing now is much better and with less plotholes. I'd like to rewrite this someday but at the moment, I'm too lazy XD And I know there are some spelling errors and grammar mistakes but I'm leaving it as it is because I want you to see how I wrote my stories months ago.

The charas are human in this story and Amu's clothes and accessories are on my fanfiction account:

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1524940/

Anime: Shugo Chara!
Title of Fanfic: Love is Painful
Pairing: Amuto (with some other pairings)
Genre: Romance/Drama/Hurt/Tragedy (main one is romance and drama though)
Rating: T for language, content, and some bloody content
Status: Complete
Summary: Amu promised herself that she would never fall in love ever again because of an accident. But what happens when a certain cat comes along?

Chapter 1: Never Falling In Love Ever Again


next chapter will be up tomorrow ^^
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Old 04-12-2009, 03:27 AM   #2
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This is actually my first ever story of Shugo Chara I hope you guys like it Now I wrote this on August 7, 2008 so it's not that good. My writing now is much better and with less plotholes. I'd like to rewrite this someday but at the moment, I'm too lazy XD And I know there are some spelling errors and grammar mistakes but I'm leaving it as it is because I want you to see how I wrote my stories months ago.

The charas are human in this story and Amu's clothes and accessories are on my fanfiction account:

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1524940/

Anime: Shugo Chara!
Title of Fanfic: Love is Painful
Pairing: Amuto (with some other pairings)
Genre: Romance/Drama/Hurt/Tragedy (main one is romance and drama though)
Rating: T for language, content, and some bloody content
Status: Complete
Summary: Amu promised herself that she would never fall in love ever again because of an accident. But what happens when a certain cat comes along?

Chapter 1: Never Falling In Love Ever Again


next chapter will be up tomorrow ^^
I love it! A bit confusing at first, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Old 04-12-2009, 06:45 AM   #3
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! I think I've already read this chapter on crunchyroll! But I never had the chance to finish it! So you're the author of this one ehhh! Even thogh it's your first story, it's still good! Thank you for posting this on here in MF!
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Old 04-12-2009, 08:01 PM   #4
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! I think I've already read this chapter on crunchyroll! But I never had the chance to finish it! So you're the author of this one ehhh! Even thogh it's your first story, it's still good! Thank you for posting this on here in MF!
yep ^^ i'm the author of the story from CR XD i think i posted this story in 3 places: fanfiction, CR, and MF ^^

i am now posting my second chapter~
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I love it! A bit confusing at first, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
i'm not surprised that u think it's confusing after all, this IS my first story and the way i look at it now, it looks like a complete amateur story.

hopefully ur questions will be cleared up as the story goes on
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<---- Just finished reading Love is Painful in FF.net.. And it's almost 4am here. .

One word: Amazing. You're really a talented author. I'm going to stalk your stories from now on. LOLOL. I might read the sequel of Love is Painful later ^^ (since it's already morning here. )

EDIT; I'll put it on spoiler tag since it'll contains spoilers~ XD


Kudos! *claps*

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Here's chapter 2~

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part 2 of chapter 2~



hope u guys enjoyed it~ next chapter up tomorrow
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<---- Just finished reading Love is Painful in FF.net.. And it's almost 4am here. .

One word: Amazing. You're really a talented author. I'm going to stalk your stories from now on. LOLOL. I might read the sequel of Love is Painful later ^^ (since it's already morning here. )

EDIT; I'll put it on spoiler tag since it'll contains spoilers~ XD


Kudos! *claps*

4 am?????? that's really late >.< it's 4 pm right now XD but since u posted that 3:19 p.m. in this time zone, i'm 11 hours behind u? O.o

aw thanks so much~ ^^ i had fun writing it but yep the part was sad T.T

hope u still review here~ XD
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i'm not surprised that u think it's confusing after all, this IS my first story and the way i look at it now, it looks like a complete amateur story.

hopefully ur questions will be cleared up as the story goes on
This is so not amateur work. I've seen so many stories that were a lot worse that weren't even first stories. If you compare it to Crossing Paths, I guess you could consider it that way, but other than that there is no way it is.

Oh yeah, by the way, I love the idea on how the charas are humans.
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