[KitsuneWannaBe]

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Happy, sad, inspiring, enlightening, good poetry hits you in the heart. I love reading and writing poetry and would love to hear from some of you other poetry lovers as well. I’m starting this thread in the hopes of hearing some wonder verses you and receiving some constructive advice about my own works so feel free to-

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please.

But remember
1. No breaking forum rules!
2. If you claim it as your own work IT MUST BE YOUR OWN WORK. If not, give due credit to the author please.
3. When commenting on a piece do so in a POLITE way please. Poems are like a look into a person’s soul. Keep that in mind please.

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~Author's index~
KitsuneWannaBe
Nuadin
Nothingmater ~"The Great War of Honor"~
(in progress) to be added to the index link all your poems to one index post and PM me the link. We've got some great stuff here kids let's share the wealth

Thank you, and have fun reading and posting.

[KitsuneWannaBe]

I'll start things off with this little number, please let me know what you think.


Kitsune-san, Kitsune-san,
I've fallen for your spell.
But if you are to spell my doom
That, only time can tell.

(Thank you *bow*)

[vampirequeen101]

lived far from here yet now he appears,
a enchanting smile so graceful yet reviled,
he stole fair maiden's heart than broke it apart,
is his sleep as fair as she?
today still he haunts her even in these dreams,
she awakes and is no different than slumber,
she lived and loved but the pain has only begun,
is his enchantments that sweet?
let her be for the fairest could never understand these things!
for as the bird flies she is too far in love to be removed for this detestable place,
the enchantment too full of grace.
- a poetic line from my movie script running from forever.....

[KitsuneWannaBe]

Originally Posted by vampirequeen101

lived far from here yet now he appears,
a enchanting smile so graceful yet reviled,
he stole fair maiden's heart than broke it apart,
is his sleep as fair as she?
today still he haunts her even in these dreams,
she awakes and is no different than slumber,
she lived and loved but the pain has only begun,
is his enchantments that sweet?
let her be for the fairest could never understand these things!
for as the bird flies she is too far in love to be removed for this detestable place,
the enchantment too full of grace.
- a poetic line from my movie script running from forever.....

Wo-o-ow. I wish I could write that well. My specialty is light and funny poems so please allow me to give you a round of applause in admiration *ClapClapClapClapClapClap* (or are you suppose to snap with poetry? I forget.) Please keep continue writing such lovely works.

[KitsuneWannaBe]

(I thought of my Kitsune peom first and I liked the format for it so I did a few more like it.)

Red Panda Girl, Red Panda Girl
Your face is brightly flushed.
Who is it you thought of under
The flaming locks you brushed?
...
Oh Panda boy, Oh Panda boy
Tread lightly on the snow.
Down the path your ancestors took
You too must surely go.
...
Oh, Who am I? Oh, Who am I
Without a form or face?
In the mirror’s a reflection
My mind can’t seem to trace.
...
Cherry Blossoms, Cherry Blossoms
Were once as white as snow.
Until a corpse’s tainted blood
Had turned their color so.
...
Oh Butterfly, Oh Butterfly
Dwell not on the past
Or the dreams you dreamt of back then
Will truly be your last.
...
Oh, Fox! Oh, Fox! Oh, clever Fox
You dance within a flame.
But no matter how they twist your words
You’ll never hold the blame.

(thank you)

[vampirequeen101]

thank you i wrote it as a spell in one of my movie scripts and it dawned on me that i had just written a poem into it.

[vampirelover1229]

Hmmm, I dont' think my poems are any good, but here's one:

Perfect Lies

Perfect lies are nothing but honest words
Absolute truths that aren’t accepted
Reality that is blocked out
Honesty that is not believed

Perfect lies consume your life
Wearing away at your heart
Forever living in your words
A made up life that the world sees

Perfect lies are without flaws
Confidence in your words
Cold words slipping from your mouth
A blind eye to the pain you cause

Perfect lies are made perfect by their flaws
Truths that are in front of your eyes
Truths that live in your heart
Imperfection made perfect

[vampirequeen101]

that's a cool poem. it works well.

[vampirelover1229]

Thanks! I thought yours was really good.

[col18]

here's one i made for school as our Ethics subject requirement; im from a Catholic University.

In the abyss of darkness and the sinister
Afraid not, faith doesn't falter
Bequeath with belief and undying prayer
Uncertainty of the unknown and threats, we shall conquer

Shepherds who don't wield their sheep
Who run into their own weep
Embracing blindness and consumed in deep
In the end they will lose every thing they ought to keep
He can't lead us if we're not willing to take a step
In the closing stages we'll just be dead
For those who denies Him will live with frailty
They will just be ravages of life eternally

We may not know all for now
Questions might flood but we'll live on somehow
Someday in His time, it'll be all for the taking
We'll see it through just keep on loving
For love may come with hurting
But happiness without it is nothing
So seek not for a perfect life
'Cause perfect doesn't seem right
When it's without a strife

i dunno if its really good for you guys....