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Old 10-15-2009, 03:32 AM   #1
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Default A stupid little YogiGareki fic for Mirlaine (CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR UNSCANLATED CHAPS)

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I'm upgrading your pics to A+



BUT IT WAS TOO LATE.






Mirlaine and I had a short conversation going that went off on a tangent in only a few posts elsewhere on this forum... It was awesome.

Anyway, I wrote this small fic in twenty minutes to cheer her up, to thank her for her work on niji_forest and to respond to that above quote (maybe. It's sexy though). Lawl, I don't think it's good enough to post on my LJ, regardless, so here you guys go (click to enlarge):



Warning: Yogi (Male) + Gareki (Male) = Male + Male = Really Gay. Also, there are spoilers up to Score 26. Vague, but they're there.





A/N: "Unfamiliar fruit" = kiwi.
for Circus' sake.



Uh...so... If I find this or pieces of this with or without its watermark posted elsewhere, I might go Virtual Ax Crazy on said person who might have posted this or pieces of this with or without its watermark, okay?

Unless you ask and link. And keep the watermark. ._.;; I-I guess...
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Old 10-15-2009, 07:22 AM   #2
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O//////O

I... D-DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY... OH GOD THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I JUST DON'T KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS MY JOY!!! XDDDDDD THANK YOU!!! *dances*

The fic is made of win! XDDDD Guys + kitty is just <3 I loved the "Who the hell are you calling cute!?" I can so imagine Gareki's face saying this ^u^ And lol, "Gareki the Second!" <3

You have so made my morning! *grins and giggles happily*
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Old 10-16-2009, 12:26 AM   #3
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O//////O

I... D-DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY... OH GOD THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I JUST DON'T KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS MY JOY!!! XDDDDDD THANK YOU!!! *dances*

The fic is made of win! XDDDD Guys + kitty is just <3 I loved the "Who the hell are you calling cute!?" I can so imagine Gareki's face saying this ^u^ And lol, "Gareki the Second!" <3

You have so made my morning! *grins and giggles happily*
Five minutes after I posted this I found like six things I wanted to change or fix so horribly! XD Alas, I'm too lazy to take another picture of the text to wartermark... I might just post it (publicly) on LJ after all, after a few adjustments here and there. Then I can edit it without hassle. <3

But I'm so glad you liked it! Your response was more than I'd hoped for! (*・∀・)/♡\(・∀・*) <3333

I was originally merely going to change the text on the panel Yogi acts out Nyanperona, but then I was all, "SHE DESERVES BETTER. ಠ_ಠ " The fic functioning as "better" if only because I'd leave the panel uncolored.... X"D

...That, and most people currently seem to be working off Mikanagi's panels anyway, so I thought that another original work floating out there might be nice. And although I do wish there were more YogiGareki Karneval fanart around, personally I'm still trying to finish at least one of three other YogiGareki one-shots/drabbles that I've been working on since late last month. 8/ Sooner or later dammit.

And yes~~~ My mind grabbed the premise of "Guys + kittens" functioning under the logic "Adding kittens is like adding ninjas! Except instead of instant awesome there is instant adorable... Unless it's a ninja kitten... Or the kitten is actually a tomcat that can scratch through your face."

...I think my point for the previous statement fell into a ditch somewhere. Ah well-- substitute point: Kitten/Ninja = Makes stuff happen. All in all, I try to have a plot or punchline in anything I write. Everything seems to turn out more entertaining that way.

BUT THANK YOU AGAIN FOR SUCH A ENTHUSIASTIC RESPONSE; I AM SINCERELY HAPPY--- <333


Lawl the particular edits I want to make for now (I'll pretend it functions as a future reference):

* Change first "skin" to "flesh"
* Might change "spat" to something else
* Rid of "Right now! (rep)" Change possibly to "<i>Right now.</i>"
* Change "How is that <i>thing</i>..." to "How is that <i>thing</i> even a kilometer near/close to cute?"
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Old 10-28-2009, 01:22 PM   #4
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i totally agree!! THANK YOU FOR DOING THAT SHORT STORY!!!! i also wish there were more gareki/yogi
moments. those two are simply hilarious when theyre together.anyways...PLEASE DO MORE!!!
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Old 10-29-2009, 03:26 AM   #5
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More GarekiXYogi yaoi please! That would make this manga so popular! I hope Nai stays single though. He and Tsukumo would be great together. <3
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